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Post by Rosemary Jackson on Feb 20, 2015 23:39:20 GMT
Hey guys! This is a preview of another story I am writing. Seriously, when I finish this story I think it's going to be the best one I've ever written! It's called The Three-Armed Hacker, and it's about a computer hacker that searches for a missing child, and, because he is working so hard, he grows an extra arm. I think you can see why I'm really excited for this I will accept comments and/or suggestions. Hope you enjoy! The Three-Armed Hacker
Chapter One
A snowflake lands on my cheek, and I wipe it off swiftly. I was in town that Saturday morning, doing my weekly grocery shopping. I hear the patter of footsteps in front of me, next to me, behind me, as well as the patter of footsteps I create. I hear the commotion that is common when Christmas time is near, and feel the cold that December brings. Everyone is shopping, buying gifts for their loved ones, but I live and work alone. I do not buy gifts for anyone besides myself.
“What’s this?” A few people ahead of me, a small crowd has gathered around a street lamp. It seems they are reading a flyer posted on the street lamp, but I cannot be sure. I am not there yet, anyways.
“A missing child?”
“Ten thousand dollar reward!”
The voices of the crowd linger towards me, and I find myself in the crowd as well. Looking over the shoulders of two ladies, I can see a missing child poster taped to the street lamp. Sure enough, the flyer states a reward of ten thousand dollars, as well as a detailed description of the missing child. Instantly I know I must find that child.
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Post by Opal Strole on Feb 21, 2015 3:57:09 GMT
LOL Three arms? How does that work?
I honestly think it would be interesting if it ended up being that the title was a metaphor. That you can somehow, somewhere in the book, make something about three arms and that's the name your character takes. That way the story ends up being all about his/her journey through cyberspace, the main character starting as wanting the reward, then working up to building a strange connection with the child.
Oohh now I really want to help
AND SO THERE WAS GMAIL
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Post by Sapphire O'Connor on Feb 21, 2015 18:34:56 GMT
Lol I dunno how it works it just does Good idea. I shall consider. YAAAAAS GMAIL! I would be honored if you want to help!
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Post by Opal Strole on Feb 21, 2015 18:37:53 GMT
*fist-pump*
YAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYAYAy
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