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Post by Lusaki Yomo on Jan 25, 2015 23:31:49 GMT
I'm gonna note this ahead of time. This is a christian thingy about someone's faith. You could read it, but I'm afraid I'm gonna get criticized by someone who isn't Christian.... so yea.... This is just the first chapter. Oh, and just a warning, there will be alot of misspelled words.
January 1, 2001 I dont get it. I really dont get it. I mean, my best frend, Jake, had never really talced about this person named Gesus or this someone called God until now, in sixth grade. He keeps telling me abowt the Gospul and how Gesus came down to Earth to save our sins or what ever. I don't have a religion. I cant relate to this. Yet Jake never stops talking abowt it. He says that God cre-a-ted us, and that he loves us and wants us to obey and worship us. I asked him why worship him. "I love God, he cre-a-ted me, and I want to grow up in his way and be a good man." Jake replys. My head gets dizy wen I play that over in my head. God sounds like he is making the Christans slaves. And yet the Christans still love him. I dont get it.
And that's the first chapter...
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Post by Callum Worthy on Feb 16, 2015 12:47:38 GMT
It's a great story overall, and I don't mind the misspelled words. I know what you mean
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